Thursday, December 17, 2009

If you could rewrite anything about your book what would it be and why?

Well lets see. If I had to change a part in the book I think it would have to be when the Mutant Erasers kidnap Angel, I don't think they should have done that. If they wanted to they should have kidnap one of the others instead of the littlest one out of the gang.

So what else I have read in the past few days is that Max, Fang, and Nudge are stuck at the School. The Mutants Erasers took Angel out of the school and left her gang there. Angel was screaming and crying, she tried to get away but she could not get away. The Mutants were to strong for her. They took Angel to the tree house. They sat her on the table and locked the door so she couldn't leave. One of the Scientists were getting ready to put Angel asleep so they could do some work on her. She was so scared that she kept shivering and shaking. The Scientist gave Angel a shot that is suppose to make her go to sleep, but it took her a long time to fall asleep. She was really tired and wanted to fall asleep, but she knew what they wanted to do to her, so she tried staying awake, but she couldn't. The Scientist started to work on Angel.

Max, Fang, and Nudge got out of the School. They had to bust threw one of the windows that the Mutants forgot to lock. They were on there way to the tree house to go rescue Angel. They were hoping she is okay. Max started crying cause she was so worried about Angel. If Angel was not okay, Max would have a hard time living. Max has taken care of Angel since she was a baby. Max is basically Angel's mom. Max and her gang all took care of each other. Fang and Nudge were tired and didn't think they could fly anymore at the moment, but Max made them. Max didn't want to loose her little baby. They were almost at the tree house. Max, Fang, and Nudge could hear the Scientists evil laugh. Max knew Angel was in trouble, and they had to hurry. Max could see threw the window that Angel was asleep and couldn't move. The Scientist had a knife about ready to cut Angel on the stomach. Fang knocked the door down and crabbed Angel from the table. Max and Nudge followed Fang into the tree house. The Scientists tried to get Fang but he was already gone. Max and Nudge were right behind Fang. The Scientists were shocked, and didn't do anything except just stand there and looked out the window.

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